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garybaldy72uk
09-15-2011, 11:31 AM
Just had another go at doing a voice-over for my show .....

What ya reckon ??

http://baldyradio.com/Show/baldyreq.mp3

JBVoice
09-28-2011, 09:02 AM
First off, I'm assuming you have little experience which is why you posted this. If that is the case, I thought you did a great job. Here is my professional criticism. The background bed was pretty plain, you want to have something that pops and catches the ear...more transitions and sound effects. Leveling was pretty good and the voice itself sounded great. Just a few thoughts to help you improve! Keep up the good work!

-JB

tomblok
09-26-2012, 06:32 AM
ok