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frankallen
02-16-2014, 06:16 PM
Hi all I'm throwing together a few ideas for ads i have for my new fitness TV network, What do you think and how can i improve it ?

Regards

Frank

johny c
02-16-2014, 06:58 PM
Sounds great Frank. To me maybe a little more volume on that voice (but thats just me) :P

GKIye
02-17-2014, 07:54 AM
Hi Frank,

I agree with John

- Voice is too soft
- Speed up the voice : so faster talk, shorter cuts
- and add some "happy feeling" to it ... afterall its about Fitness