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frankallen
09-28-2014, 11:59 AM
HI guys
I have been asked to voice a speeding awareness script, i believe the client will be adding video to it but i would like you thoughts on this so far please.

It may change over the course but my initial idea was this..

GKIye
09-28-2014, 05:15 PM
Hi Frank,

Sounds very nice ...
- I would add at :58 or :59 a scream or yell from a kid (as impact effect to the car incident)
- At the moment the music starts playing (in the car) I would set the music less higher ... Currently the music "surrounds" your voice too much

Overall all sound elements are right at their spot
Good job !

saint
09-29-2014, 12:22 AM
Two suggestions
- Length should be shortened a bit.
- Tone down the music, I agree with Gkyle - the music is hard to seperate from your voice.

BTW - love the music bed - Billy Idol still rocks after all these years !

frankallen
09-29-2014, 06:12 PM
Thank you kindly chaps as always i appreciate you taking the time to check it out for me :) I have taken on board your suggestions and adjusted the project accordingly.