View Full Version : Critique These Ads

05-05-2010, 02:38 AM
Here are my first radio ads that I have ever created. I'm a young college student, just having fun I guess, using my voice to maybe find an entrance somewhere, someday. My dream is to be a PA guy for a pro sports team, preferably in the NBA. I'd fall over for that.

These aired within the last month on local radio for a fundraiser Poker Tournament for our University's Athletic Department. The others are for a Web Site Design/Hosting company. I created 2 for them actually, in 30 second spots.

Give me your thoughts.

Heartland Hosting 1 (http://www.audioadam.com/podcast/HHostingAd.mp3)
Heartland Hosting 2 (http://www.audioadam.com/podcast/HHostingAd2.mp3)
Poker Tournament (http://www.audioadam.com/podcast/PokerAd.mp3)