Here's my aircheck: Is my accent suitable for Radio announcing in US/Canada?

[GKIye]

Hi Jon,

Honestly "Pasta" is the best out of three.
The file "commercial" is corrupt, only 3,1kb and don't has any audio content.

It would be great if You could find a decent microphone.
Untill now You still have the "pop" into the recorded content.
I'm sure with the right mic Your recording gonna become way better.

[DJJon]

May I have feedback on these two voiceover demos please? They have been recorded with different voicing styles. In each case, does the voice match the script?

[GKIye]

I notice that the "107771" file is the same as into Your earlier post (about pasta).
The voice quality of file "107780" is way lesser.

Please check my earlier reply made some minutes ago

May I have feedback on these two voiceover demos please? They have been recorded with different voicing styles. In each case, does the voice match the script?

[DJJon]

I notice that the "107771" file is the same as into Your earlier post (about pasta).
The voice quality of file "107780" is way lesser.

Please check my earlier reply made some minutes ago

Thanks! Im recording in a soundproof room with my phone. However Im using a special recording app.

[DJJon]

I recorded this script in two different styles. Would you please give me feedback on both?

The first one is supposed to sound formal, educational, like a teacher giving a lecture
The second take is supposed to sound informal, friendly. (like two friends having a discussion over coffee)

Does it work?

(Script taken from a sample script about albert einstein)