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    So I Lied, Another One :D Critism Wanted Please!

    So I did another one for the hell of it. I think it sounds pretty cool. Tell me what you think. Let's go on a scale of 1-10 this time. And please, if there's anything wrong with it, let me know! YOU GUYS ROCK!

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    Sounding good. Watch the levels when you are talking about tuning in as the effect drowns out the vocal. Like the use of vocal effects and stutter.


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    Quote Originally Posted by LeafpileRadio View Post
    So I did another one for the hell of it. I think it sounds pretty cool. Tell me what you think. Let's go on a scale of 1-10 this time. And please, if there's anything wrong with it, let me know! YOU GUYS ROCK!

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    I noticed that after you said something. Thanks Mark, I will adjust it and re-up

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    Like it, nice job putting it together

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    Thank you very much TelTek

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    Nice work, sounds pretty good.
    One thing I might mention is try and tighten up your vocals a bit, sounds a bit slow and forced towards the end.
    Also, sound effects at the start don't have to go for so long, bring something in over the top or move everything on top of it, it sounds like it could be trimmed down to less than a second.
    Also, you may even consider not having that sound effect at all, and just coming in on the radio effects.

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    Once again a good mini-production!

    Only criticism is what Mark said, but since you have already taken this on board i'll be quiet

    Hope all is going well for you in the VO world!

    James

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    Here's a revised version.

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    i liek it much better. much tighter, flows better. nice work.

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    Thank you, Thank you -takes a bow-

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