Please Help

[paddy140]

i need a voiceover for a new station called raveworldfm.co.uk what i need you to say is the the following:

 

YOUR LISTENING TO RAVEWORLDFM.CO.UK WITH DJ CULLEN STAY TUNED AND SEND IN THEM REQUEST.

 

i would like that done please if you can do one with no brackround muisc and one with backround music thanks.

 

rep will be given and again thanks.

[Jinglemaster]

Hi Paddy

 

I will gladly do these for you, but I want to check some of the grammar here.

 

You have no comma between DJ CULLEN and STAY TUNED. Can I assume you want a pause there? ie ... DJ CULLEN, STAY TUNED.....

 

Also: AND SEND IN THEM REQUEST. Do you mean that or do you mean AND SEND IN YOUR REQUEST or AND SEND IN A REQUEST, or something else? Them request does not sound right UNLESS that is what you actualy want. I don't mind and will say whatever you want, but I won't redo it if it was a mistake in the first place if that makes sense. Just confirm EXCATLY what you want said, putting a pause, full stop or whatever wher you want.

 

Post back here what you are think and I will doi these as soon as you have posted.

 

Regards

Fin

[paddy140]

ok i would like it like this.

 

YOUR LISTENING TO RAVEWORLDFM.CO.UK WITH DJ CULLEN,STAY TUNED AND SEND IN YOUR REQUEST.

 

sorry about the last one but now it is right and thanks once again.

[Jinglemaster]

Ok, it is late so I can only do the produced one for now. Here you go:

[Jinglemaster]

Right, here is the dry version.