LeafpileRadio Posted November 24, 2009 Share Posted November 24, 2009 So I did another one for the hell of it. I think it sounds pretty cool. Tell me what you think. Let's go on a scale of 1-10 this time. And please, if there's anything wrong with it, let me know! YOU GUYS ROCK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Baabaa Productions Posted November 24, 2009 Share Posted November 24, 2009 Sounding good. Watch the levels when you are talking about tuning in as the effect drowns out the vocal. Like the use of vocal effects and stutter. Mark So I did another one for the hell of it. I think it sounds pretty cool. Tell me what you think. Let's go on a scale of 1-10 this time. And please, if there's anything wrong with it, let me know! YOU GUYS ROCK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeafpileRadio Posted November 24, 2009 Author Share Posted November 24, 2009 I noticed that after you said something. Thanks Mark, I will adjust it and re-up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teltek Posted November 24, 2009 Share Posted November 24, 2009 Like it, nice job putting it together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeafpileRadio Posted November 24, 2009 Author Share Posted November 24, 2009 Thank you very much TelTek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jax_rox Posted November 24, 2009 Share Posted November 24, 2009 Nice work, sounds pretty good. One thing I might mention is try and tighten up your vocals a bit, sounds a bit slow and forced towards the end. Also, sound effects at the start don't have to go for so long, bring something in over the top or move everything on top of it, it sounds like it could be trimmed down to less than a second. Also, you may even consider not having that sound effect at all, and just coming in on the radio effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavestreamingConnect Posted November 24, 2009 Share Posted November 24, 2009 Once again a good mini-production! Only criticism is what Mark said, but since you have already taken this on board i'll be quiet Hope all is going well for you in the VO world! James Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeafpileRadio Posted November 24, 2009 Author Share Posted November 24, 2009 Here's a revised version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jax_rox Posted November 24, 2009 Share Posted November 24, 2009 i liek it much better. much tighter, flows better. nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeafpileRadio Posted November 24, 2009 Author Share Posted November 24, 2009 Thank you, Thank you -takes a bow- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GKIye Posted November 25, 2009 Share Posted November 25, 2009 Your skills are getting better everytime One major notice is : The VOX says " ... well stop right here" However the "bed" has already been stopped before the words "stop right here" Its only a difference of a small 500ms untill 800ms ... but that difference is most important I know my review sounds as looking for needles into water LOL however it is important to increase your current skills So ... 2 U Here's a revised version. Visit and listen @ BW ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeafpileRadio Posted November 25, 2009 Author Share Posted November 25, 2009 OK. Damn you got a good ear lol. The beginning part trips me out. The vocals wash with the tuning effect. But I took out the silence after magnifying the track 1,000,000x lol. Let's see if this works better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GKIye Posted November 25, 2009 Share Posted November 25, 2009 Well .. thats what they call experience What I mean is : Well STOP RIGHT Here Currently the "Well" has also a silence The "silence" has to start at the beginning of the word "STOP" In fact you can re-start the bed after the word "stop" .. that way it gonna give even more attention to the general content ... and its a way to give the general content more drive ... Again .. and sorry for that ... I'm in search for needles into "deep" waters LOL please forgive Me :biggrinthumb: OK. Damn you got a good ear lol. Visit and listen @ BW ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleslie Posted November 25, 2009 Share Posted November 25, 2009 Deleted By User Because He Is Dumb Because I Can And I Am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeafpileRadio Posted November 25, 2009 Author Share Posted November 25, 2009 No! That is specifically for that station. I'm just uping demo's of actual liners I've made. I can make you a non branded one if you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jax_rox Posted November 25, 2009 Share Posted November 25, 2009 Well .. thats what they call experience What I mean is : Well STOP RIGHT Here Currently the "Well" has also a silence The "silence" has to start at the beginning of the word "STOP" In fact you can re-start the bed after the word "stop" .. that way it gonna give even more attention to the general content ... and its a way to give the general content more drive ... Again .. and sorry for that ... I'm in search for needles into "deep" waters LOL please forgive Me :biggrinthumb: I think something like this is just a matter of personal taste, and what works well for your imaging and your listeners. Personally, I might even remove the doubling on the 'WELL STOP,' insert a beat, or some punchy sound effect on the word 'STOP' and then a deliberate pause immediately after to get people's attention, and then come back in and fatten out the 'RIGHT HERE' with the doubling. A lot of these sort of things are just personal taste, and knowing the station. If you really wanted to hone your skills, id suggest taking on board both ideas, perhaps even producing both up, even if you don't use them if only for a bit of practice, and to see what sounds better - I've often reproduced entire promos just to give it a go and see what it sounds like and ended up swapping the on air version with the new version because it sounds so much better. I do have to say its sounding pretty good at the moment, but it doesn't hurt to keep playing around. At some point though, you do have to get something on air, you can't spend days playing with your promos trying to get them perfect when you have deadlines to meet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GKIye Posted November 26, 2009 Share Posted November 26, 2009 Thanks Jay, I agree with your point of view ... its all about personal taste Visit and listen @ BW ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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