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I am working on a short " call to action " audio pre-roll that will play before the main media starts.

 

I would like to get your feed back - suggestions on the wording please :)

 

 

We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection.

 

Remember to bookmark the Scenic Radio website and tell all your friends about us.

 

Please visit and like the Scenic Radio page on Facebook as well.

 

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Just a thought, but in the future, you might want to limit the requests.

You have 2 separate requests in your clip, and one of them is technically 2, so you have a total of 3 actions you are wanting people to do.

Bookmark your website, share it with friends, and like you on facebook.

 

Your clip would be more effective if it were split into two ads that you played randomly.

 

clip one:

We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection.

Be sure to like us at facebook.com/stationurl

 

clip two:

We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection.

Be sure to tell your friends about us at http://www.stationurl.com

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Thumbs up for "eddas" !

 

I would even suggest to delete some of it

Never use : "I hope" ... it can give the meaning to a visitor that You are not 100% sure of what is offered

 

so :

  • clip one:

    Enjoy your entertainment selection.

    Be sure to like us at facebook.com/stationurl

     

    clip two:

    Enjoy your entertainment selection.

    Be sure to tell your friends about us at
    www.stationurl.com


     

     
     

 

Visit and listen @ BW !

http://i.imgur.com/Ggmw4ub.gif

 

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We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection.

 

Remember to bookmark the Scenic Radio website and tell all your friends about us.

 

Please visit and like the Scenic Radio page on Facebook as well.

 

 

There should only be one call-to-action, otherwise the audience will get lost in the process. You're demanding 3 actions in the script:

 

1) Bookmark the website

2) Visit the FB page

3) Like the FB page

 

It should focus on one.

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