saint Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 I am working on a short " call to action " audio pre-roll that will play before the main media starts. I would like to get your feed back - suggestions on the wording please We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection. Remember to bookmark the Scenic Radio website and tell all your friends about us. Please visit and like the Scenic Radio page on Facebook as well. Relaxing Entertainment For The World - - www.ScenicRadio.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamboUK Posted August 26, 2013 Share Posted August 26, 2013 I think you need to include the URL's of the website and the facebook page as not everyone will have found your station via the website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frankallen Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 Did you get this done buddy ? http://i.imgur.com/qrEUBH7.png Check us out http://www.itsjustradio.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saint Posted December 1, 2013 Author Share Posted December 1, 2013 Yep - got it all sorted out. Thanks mate Relaxing Entertainment For The World - - www.ScenicRadio.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddas Posted December 11, 2013 Share Posted December 11, 2013 Just a thought, but in the future, you might want to limit the requests. You have 2 separate requests in your clip, and one of them is technically 2, so you have a total of 3 actions you are wanting people to do. Bookmark your website, share it with friends, and like you on facebook. Your clip would be more effective if it were split into two ads that you played randomly. clip one: We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection. Be sure to like us at facebook.com/stationurl clip two: We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection. Be sure to tell your friends about us at http://www.stationurl.com MSUBRadio.com your source for all things local and independent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saint Posted December 12, 2013 Author Share Posted December 12, 2013 Excellent point Eddas, never overlook the power of KISS. (Keep It Simple Stupid) Spot on mate ! Relaxing Entertainment For The World - - www.ScenicRadio.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GKIye Posted December 12, 2013 Share Posted December 12, 2013 Thumbs up for "eddas" ! I would even suggest to delete some of it Never use : "I hope" ... it can give the meaning to a visitor that You are not 100% sure of what is offered so : clip one: Enjoy your entertainment selection. Be sure to like us at facebook.com/stationurl clip two: Enjoy your entertainment selection. Be sure to tell your friends about us at www.stationurl.com Visit and listen @ BW ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
austinprime Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 Let's hear it! Hi! I'm Austin and I do voiceovers. Hire me here: http://austinpri.me Free generic voice parts: http://austinpri.me/free-stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarahWilliams Posted January 27, 2015 Share Posted January 27, 2015 We hope you enjoy your entertainment selection. Remember to bookmark the Scenic Radio website and tell all your friends about us. Please visit and like the Scenic Radio page on Facebook as well. There should only be one call-to-action, otherwise the audience will get lost in the process. You're demanding 3 actions in the script: 1) Bookmark the website 2) Visit the FB page 3) Like the FB page It should focus on one. Voice overs: www.youtube.com/user/golocalise The leading translation and multilingual voice overs agency providing voice overs for corporate video production. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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