frankallen Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Hi all I'm throwing together a few ideas for ads i have for my new fitness TV network, What do you think and how can i improve it ? Regards Frankftv.mp3 http://i.imgur.com/qrEUBH7.png Check us out http://www.itsjustradio.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johny c Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Sounds great Frank. To me maybe a little more volume on that voice (but thats just me) RAG-FM 107.7 Raglan New Zealand & ragfm.com ........"Top Music Top of the Dial" Click HERE to listen to the RAG-FM radio stream Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GKIye Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 Hi Frank, I agree with John - Voice is too soft - Speed up the voice : so faster talk, shorter cuts - and add some "happy feeling" to it ... afterall its about Fitness Visit and listen @ BW ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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