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I am putting together a station announcement to be played in an actual radio stream.

 

Could you give it a good look over and see what you think please ?

 

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Thank you for listening to scenic radio.

 

Enjoy more relaxing entertainment at the scenic radio website.

 

- Classic audio books

 

- Old time radio shows

 

- Nature videos

 

- Scenic train rides

 

Visit - www.scenicradio.com

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It looks ok to Me Saint ...

I would make these small changes :

 

Thank you for listening to scenic radio

 

- Classic audio books

 

- Old time radio shows

 

- Nature videos

 

- Scenic train rides

Enjoy more relaxing entertainment at the scenic radio website scenicradio.com

 

Concerning my own idea ... Words as = "visit www. etc" are sounding a bit oldfashion

People these days are used to hear and write the domain itself

 

so far my 2 cents :rolleyes:

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It looks ok to Me Saint ...

I would make these small changes :

 

Concerning my own idea ... Words as = "visit www. etc" are sounding a bit oldfashion

People these days are used to hear and write the domain itself

 

so far my 2 cents :rolleyes:

 

I agree with those changes. To me it definitely sounds more modern worded like that!

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I am putting together a station announcement to be played in an actual radio stream.

 

Could you give it a good look over and see what you think please ?

 

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

 

Thank you for listening to scenic radio.

 

Enjoy more relaxing entertainment at the scenic radio website.

 

- Classic audio books

 

- Old time radio shows

 

- Nature videos

 

- Scenic train rides

 

Visit - www.scenicradio.com

 

In my opinion a little to generic maybe this

 

 

Thanks for checking out the scenic radio website. We really hope you listened to something great today.

 

Spoiled for for choice ? Can't make up your mind ? Why not check out our .....

 

- Classic audio books

 

- Old time radio shows

 

- Nature videos

 

- Scenic train rides

 

 

Enjoy more relaxing entertainment only at the scenic radio .com

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If you could get a female with a sexy sultry voice saying something along the line of:

 

emmmm...scenic radio, (pause)

 

What's your pleasure today?(Pause)

 

Lay back, relax and listen to a classic novel, (pause)

 

close your eyes and drift back in time listening to an old time radio show, (pause)

 

or how about a stroll through nature (optional) lay under a shade tree and observe nature

 

or board a train for a scenic train ride through the country.

 

emmmm, enjoy more relaxing entertainment at scenicradio.com

 

 

 

While I was at your site I noticed Under Terms of use

 

6. Unauthorized Use of Materials - Number 8

8. Send the written communication to the following address:

Designated Agent for Claimed Infringement:

Contact webmaster E-Mail

 

Are you going to put in a email link or an actual address for snail mail?

 

I am also looking at OTR and possibly audio books, just haven't gotten around to building the websites yet.

Are you running without a license under Public domain? If so, some of the Sherlock Holmes shows were from the UK and may still be under UK copyright. Not sure, you may want to research that.

"In 1955, NBC re-ran the transcribed BBC series". I'm a little leery of any series from outside the USA. I have backed away from any series from Canada, UK, South Africa etc.

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WayneS

 

There are several radio productions of Sherlock Holmes, some are British and some are American.

 

The New Adventures of Sherlock Holmes was written and produced in the United States from October 2, 1939 to July 7, 1947. The NBC Blue Network ( forerunner to the American Broadcasting Corporation ) was the media entity that created and produced The New Adventures of Sherlock Holmes.

 

Anthony Boucher was an American science fiction editor and author of mystery novels and short stories, who also scripted numerous radio programs. The New Adventures Of Sherlock Holmes was one of the radio programs he wrote for. Denis Green also assisted Anthony Boucher in the writing of several of the episodes of The New Adventures Of Sherlock Holmes.

 

The British Broadcasting Corporation was not affiliated with the writing, production or distribution of the radio program The New Adventures Of Sherlock Holmes.

 

BBC version of Sherlock Holmes.

 

John Gielgud played Holmes for BBC radio in the 1950s, with Ralph Richardson as Watson.

 

Carleton Hobbs portrayed Holmes in a series of BBC radio broadcasts that ran from 1952 to 1969, with Norman Shelley playing Watson.

 

BBC Radio 4 also produced radio dramatisations of the complete Sherlock Holmes stories, featuring Clive Merrison as Holmes and Michael Williams as Watson. This version ran from 1989 and 1998.

 

Thanks for the heads up on the Terms of use snafu - got it fixed.

 

And most of all - thanks to every one that gave their valuable input and insight !

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I really liked what Frank and Wayne did - and Gtk / the others made a valid point about the www and plainness.

 

 

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Thanks for listening to the ambient sounds of scenic radio. We hope you enjoyed our unique station.

 

Want to try something different ? Let your imagination roam and your mind explore with our special collection of entertainment.

 

- Travel through time and space while relaxing with a classic audio novel.

 

- Enjoy the theatre of the mind and listen to an old time radio show.

 

- Behold the visual beauty of nature.

 

- Board a train for a scenic ride through the country.

 

- Delight to the sounds of classical music.

 

You can enjoy all of this and more at Scenic Radio .com

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I really liked what Frank and Wayne did - and Gtk / the others made a valid point about the www and plainness.

 

 

- Revised -

 

Thanks for listening to the ambient sounds of scenic radio. We hope you enjoyed our unique station.

 

Want to try something different ? Let your imagination roam and your mind explore with our special collection of entertainment.

 

- Travel through time and space while relaxing with a classic audio novel.

 

- Enjoy the theatre of the mind and listen to an old time radio show.

 

- Behold the visual beauty of nature.

 

- Board a train for a scenic ride through the country.

 

- Delight to the sounds of classical music.

 

You can enjoy all of this and more at Scenic Radio .com

 

 

Enjoy :)

scenic radio_mixdown.mp3

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